Psalm 88/Test/Semantics

From Psalms: Layer by Layer
Jump to: navigation, search


About the Grammar & Semantics Layer

Semantics is the study of how language is used to represent meaning. The goal of semantic analysis for interpreting and translating the Bible is to understand the meaning of words and how they relate to each other in context. We want to understand what is implicit about word meaning – and thus assumed by the original audience – and make it explicit – and thus clear for us who are removed by time, language, and culture. The semantics layer is composed of three major branches: lexical semantics, phrase-level semantics and verbal semantics. (Click 'Expand' to the right for more information.)

About Lexical Semantics

One major branch of semantic study is lexical semantics, which refers to the study of word meanings. It examines semantic range (=possible meanings of a word), the relationship between words (e.g. synonymy, hyponymy), as well as the relationship between words and larger concepts (conceptual domains). One component of our approach involves not only the study of the Hebrew word meaning, but also of our own assumptions about word meaning in modern languages. Because the researcher necessarily starts with their own cultural assumptions (in our case, those of Western-trained scholars), this part of the analysis should be done afresh for every culture.

For a detailed description of our method, see the Lexical Semantics Creator Guidelines.

About Phrase-level Semantics

The Phrase-level Semantics layer analyses the meaning of syntactic units which are larger than the level of the word and smaller than the level of the clause. Specifically, this layer analyses the meaning of prepositional phrases (e.g., לְאִישׁ), construct phrases (e.g., אִישׁ אֱלֹהִים), phrases formed by a coordinating waw conjunction (e.g., אִישׁ וְאִשָּׁה) and noun phrases which consist of a noun plus a determiner (e.g., הָאִישׁ) or a quantifier (e.g., כֹּל אִישׁ).

For a detailed description of our method, see the Phrase-level Semantics Creator Guidelines.

About Verbal Semantics

This sub-layer focuses on the relationship between verbs, time and modality. These are important categories for interpretation and translation, and how one analyses a verb can have a significant effect on how it is rendered. This sub-layer has been through several iterations, as it strives to accomplish two things: (1) Transparency for the native Hebrew structures, and (2) Transparency for the interpretation necessary to translate the verbal semantics into other languages.

For a detailed description of our method, see the Verbal Semantics Creator Guidelines.

About the Grammar Layer

The grammar layer visually represents the grammar and syntax of each clause. It also displays alternative interpretations of the grammar. (For more information, click "Show/Hide Grammar Legend" below.)


The grammar layer visually represents the grammar and syntax of each clause. It also displays alternative interpretations of the grammar. (For more information, click "Grammar Legend" below.)

Visualization Description
Legends - Clause.png
The clause is represented by a horizontal line with a vertical line crossing through it, separating the subject and the verb.
Legends - Object.png
The object is indicated by a vertical line that does not cross the horizontal line of the clause. Infinitives and participles may also have objects. If the direct object marker (d.o.m.) is present in the text, it appears in the diagram immediately before the object. If the grammar includes a secondary object, the secondary object will appear after the object, separated by another vertical line that does not cross the horizontal line of the clause.
Legends - Subject complement-1.png
The subject complement follows the verb (often omitted in Hebrew) separated with a line leaning toward the right. It can be a noun, a whole prepositional phrase or an adjective. The later two appear modifying the complement slot.
Legends - Object complement.png
When a noun further describes or renames the object, it is an object complement. The object complement follows the object separated by a line leaning toward the right.
Legends - Construct Chain.png
In a construct chain, the noun in the absolute form modifies the noun in the construct form.
Legends - Participle.png
Participles are indicated in whatever position in the clause they are in with a curved line before the participle. Participles can occur as nominal, where they take the place of a noun, predicate, where they take the place of a verb, or attributive, where they modify a noun or a verb similar to adjectives or adverbs.
Legends - Infinitive.png
Infinitives are indicated by two parallel lines before the infinitive that cross the horizontal line. Infinitive constructs can appear as the verb in an embedded clause. Infinitive absolutes typically appear as an adverbial.
Legends - Subject of Infinitive 1.png
The subject of the infinitive often appears in construct to it. In this situation, the infinitive and subject are diagrammed as a construct chain.
Legends - Object of Infinitive.png
The object of the infinitive is indicated by a vertical line that does not cross the horizontal line of the infinitival clause.
Legends - Modifiers 1.png
Modifiers are represented by a solid diagonal line from the word they modify. They can attach to verbs, adjectives, or nouns. If modifying a verb or adjective, it is an adverb, but if modifying a noun, it is an adjective, a quantifier, or a definite article. If an adverb is modifying a modifier, it is connected to the modifier by a small dashed horizontal line.
Legends - Adverbial.png
Adverbials are indicated by a dashed diagonal line extending to a horizontal line. These are nouns or infinitives that function adverbially (modifying either a verb or a participle), but are not connected by a preposition.
Legends - Prepositional Phrase.png
Prepositional phrases are indicated by a solid diagonal line extending to a horizontal line. The preposition is to the left of the diagonal line and the dependent of the preposition is on the horizontal line. They can modify verbs (adverbial) or nouns (adjectival).
Legends - Embedded Clause 1.png
Embedded clauses are indicated by a "stand" that looks like an upside-down Y. The stand rests in the grammatical position that the clause fulfills. Extending from the top of the stand is a horizontal line for the clause. If introduced by a complementizer, for example כִּי, the complementizer appears before the stand. Embedded clauses can stand in the place of any noun.
Legends - Compound clauses.png
When clauses are joined by a conjunction, they are compound clauses. These clauses are connected by a vertical dotted line. The conjunction is placed next to the dotted line.
Legends - Compound elements 2.png
Within a clause, if two or more parts of speech are compound, these are represented by angled lines reaching to the two compound elements connected by a solid vertical line. If a conjunction is used, the conjunction appears to the left of the vertical line. Almost all parts of speech can be compound.
Legends - Subordinate clause.png
Subordinate clauses are indicated by a dashed line coming from the line dividing the subject from the predicate in the independent clause and leading to the horizontal line of the subordinate clause. The subordinating conjunction appears next to the dashed line.
Legends - Relative Clause 1.png
Relative clauses also have a dashed line, but the line connects the antecedent to the horizontal line of the relative clause. The relative particle appears next to the dashed line.
Legends - Sentence fragment.png
Sentence fragments are represented by a horizontal line with no vertical lines. They are most frequently used in superscriptions to psalms. They are visually similar to discourse particles and vocatives, but most often consist of a noun phrase (that does not refer to a person or people group) or a prepositional phrase.
Legends - Discourse particle&Vocative.png
In the body of the psalm, a horizontal line by itself (with no modifiers or vertical lines) can indicate either a discourse particle or a vocative (if the word is a noun referring to a person or people group). A discourse particle is a conjunction or particle that functions at the discourse level, not at the grammatical level. Vocatives can appear either before or after the clause addressed to them, depending on the word order of the Hebrew.
Legends - Apposition.png
Apposition is indicated by an equal sign equating the two noun phrases. This can occur with a noun in any function in a sentence.
Hebrew text colors
Default preferred text The default preferred reading is represented by a black line. The text of the MT is represented in bold black text.
Dispreferred reading The dispreferred reading is an alternative interpretation of the grammar, represented by a pink line. The text of the MT is represented in bold pink text, while emendations and revocalizations retain their corresponding colors (see below).
Emended text Emended text, text in which the consonants differ from the consonants of the Masoretic text, is represented by bold blue text, whether that reading is preferred or dispreferred.
Revocalized text Revocalized text, text in which only the vowels differ from the vowels of the Masoretic text, is represented by bold purple text, whether that reading is preferred or dispreferred.
(Supplied elided element) Any element that is elided in the Hebrew text is represented by bold gray text in parentheses.
( ) The position of a non-supplied elided element is represented by empty black parentheses.
For example, this would be used in the place of the noun when an adjective functions substantivally or in the place of the antecedent when a relative clause has an implied antecedent.
Gloss text colors
Gloss used in the CBC The gloss used in the Close-but-Clear translation is represented by bold blue text.
Literal gloss >> derived meaning A gloss that shows the more literal meaning as well as the derived figurative meaning is represented in blue text with arrows pointing towards the more figurative meaning. The gloss used in the CBC will be bolded.
Supplied elided element The gloss for a supplied elided element is represented in bold gray text.

About the Lexical Semantics Layer

One major branch of semantic study is lexical semantics, which refers to the study of word meanings. It examines semantic range (=possible meanings of a word), the relationship between words (e.g. synonymy, hyponymy), as well as the relationship between words and larger concepts (conceptual domains). One component of our approach involves not only the study of the Hebrew word meaning, but also of our own assumptions about word meaning in modern languages. Because the researcher necessarily starts with their own cultural assumptions (in our case, those of Western-trained scholars), this part of the analysis should be done afresh for every culture.

For a detailed description of our method, see the Lexical Semantics Creator Guidelines.

About the Phrase-Level Semantics Layer

The Phrase-level Semantics layer analyses the meaning of syntactic units which are larger than the level of the word and smaller than the level of the clause. Specifically, this layer analyses the meaning of prepositional phrases (e.g., לְאִישׁ), construct phrases (e.g., אִישׁ אֱלֹהִים), phrases formed by a coordinating waw conjunction (e.g., אִישׁ וְאִשָּׁה) and noun phrases which consist of a noun plus a determiner (e.g., הָאִישׁ) or a quantifier (e.g., כֹּל אִישׁ).

For a detailed description of our method, see the Phrase-level Semantics Creator Guidelines.


(For more information, click "Phrase-level Legend" below.)

Visualization Description
3 Legends - Prepositional Phrase.png
The prepositional phrase is indicated by a solid green oval.
3 Legends - Construct Chain.png
The construct chain is indicated by a solid yellow oval.
3 Legends - phrase-level ו.png
When the conjunction ו appears at the phrase-level (not clause-level), it is indicated by a solid light purple oval.
3 Legends - Article.png
The article is indicated by a solid blue oval.

About the Verbal Semantics Layer

This sub-layer focuses on the relationship between verbs, time and modality. These are important categories for interpretation and translation, and how one analyses a verb can have a significant effect on how it is rendered. This sub-layer has been through several iterations, as it strives to accomplish two things: (1) Transparency for the native Hebrew structures, and (2) Transparency for the interpretation necessary to translate the verbal semantics into other languages.

For a detailed description of our method, see the Verbal Semantics Creator Guidelines.


(For more information, click "Verbal Legend" below.)

Conjugations
qatal yiqtol-jussive
wayyiqtol (following qatal)* cohortative
yiqtol participle
wayyiqtol (following yiqtol)* wayyiqtol (following participle)*
weyiqtol inf. construct
weqatal inf. absolute
*Wayyiqtol is colored a darker version of the conjugation it follows.
Relative tense arrows
Relative tense arrows (placed within the appropriate 'Fut/Pres/Past' column) are color coded according to the conjugation of the verb. The arrows in the table below are colored according to the typical uses of the conjugations.
After/posterior/future Imminent future Simultaneous/right now Recent past Before/anterior/past


Aspect
Continuous Habitual or iterative Stative Perfective
Encoded in words ⟲⟲⟲
Inferable from context ⟲⟲⟲
Reference point movement
Movement No movement
Modality
indicative purpose/result
jussive necessity
imperative possible
cohortative probable
wish ability
(past) conditional interrogative, etc.

If an emendation or revocalization is preferred, that emendation or revocalization will be marked in the Hebrew text of all the visuals.

Emendations/Revocalizations legend
*Emended text* Emended text, text in which the consonants differ from the consonants of the Masoretic text, is indicated by blue asterisks on either side of the emendation.
*Revocalized text* Revocalized text, text in which only the vowels differ from the vowels of the Masoretic text, is indicated by purple asterisks on either side of the revocalization.

Psalm 88 Verbal Semantics

For an overview of the Verbal Semantics of Psalm 88, click the expandable button below.

Psalm 88 Verbal Semantics Chart

(Click diagram to enlarge)

Psalm 088 - Verbal Semantics.jpg



Psalm 88 Semantic Analysis & Diagrams

The following grammatical diagrams are zoomable, and the lexical and phrasal overlays can be toggled on/off. Notes on the semantic layers can be found beneath each verse's diagram.

V. 1


Preferred


Notes

No Grammar notes to display for Psalm 88:1.
No Lexical notes to display for Psalm 88:1.

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 1: עַל-מָחֲלַת לְעַנּוֹת
"The meaning of mahalath-leannoth is uncertain, but it is often assumed to be a tune or chanting pattern to be used with the psalm" (Tate 1990, 394).
Mowinckel (1962, 2:210) suggests that mahalath is equal to “song” or “playing instrument” (probably a “reed-pipe”) and suggests the reference is to the flute or “flute playing,” which he argues would indicate a psalm of lament (reed pipes/flutes were played at lamentation ceremonies (cf. Jer 48:36). However, he argues that in 88:1 the עַל-מָחֲלַת means “in connection with (properly ‘over’) illness” and relates to purification from illness. Most modern translations as well as LXX keep mahalath; Jerome reads "chorus" (namely, 'to the musical director over the chorus'); Targum has "according to the prayer"; BDB understands it as a name of a tune. We will take Mowinckel's reading as the preferred one, as it fits with the content of our psalm. Eerdmans' (1947, 138) interesting theory supports this reading. He notes that in Assyrian incantation texts for healing, the name of the patient had to be mentioned when they were recited, and he supposes that such is the case in the use of Pss 53 and 88. The עַל-מָחֲלַת... לְעַנּוֹת would mean “on account of the sickness of ...” , with the name of the sufferer added in each case.
As for לְעַנּוֹת, Mowinckel takes it as “for penance” (properly “to humiliate / abase ; a piel inf. const. from עני) and argues that it indicates that the psalm was used as a psalm of penitence and lamentation, probably in rituals associated with purification from illness (Tate 1990, 395). This purpose, however, does not seem to be matched by the psalm itself, where the psalmist does not show penitence or profess a sin. LXX reads לענות in qal (“to answer”), which does not make much sense in the context, while Jerome reads in the same way morphologically, but chooses a different polysemous meaning of the root (“to sing“). It seems, however, that the kind of singing related to the root עני has to do with mass festivities and praises (Ex 15:21, 1Sam 21:12), which does not suit the general tone of the psalm. We prefer to read this infinitive form as for self-affliction, a possible ellipsis of the idiom עִנָּה נֶפֶשׁ "to humble oneself" (cf. Ps 35:13).
  • v. 1: Heman the Ezrahite
The adjective Ezrahite (LXX has 'Israelite') may be understood as either a gentilic reference to Heman's being a progeny of Zerah (1Chr 2:6) or as "native" (i.e. “from a pre-Israelite family”), derived from the noun אֶזְרָח. There seems to be a confusion between two figures called Heman, one from Judah (see above) and one who was among the Korahite Levite singers in the temple, c.f. 1Chr 6:18, 22. "There seems to be no real answer to all this confusion. We are probably dealing with more than one Heman in the traditions... The inscription is probably a double one, perhaps derived from two different sources, possibly indicating that a Heman psalm has been taken into a Korahite collection, regardless of the lineage of Heman" (Tate 1990, 395).
  • v. 1: הָאֶזְרָחִי
An attributive adjective must agree with the noun its modifying in terms of definiteness. In our case the noun is a proper name, naturally definite (הֵימָן). Additionally, the article identifies this Heman as a particular historical figure known to the hearers, probably a Levite singer.

Verbal Notes

  • The infinitive לְעַנּוֹת is read as a purpose clause indicating the religious function of the psalm: "it indicates that the psalm was used as a psalm of penitence and lamentation, probably in rituals associated with purification from illness." (Tate 1990:395); cf. note in Lexical Semantics. Under this reading, we take the infinitive as indicating a continuous action reflecting the process of purification. Since the English simple infinitive is unmarked in terms of aspect, the continuous aspect is not reflected in our CBC.



V. 2


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 2]
      Fragment
        Vocative
          Apposition
            noun: יְהוָה YHWH
            ConstructChain <gloss="the god that saves me >> the God of my salvation">
              noun: אֱלֹהֵי God
              ConstructChain
                noun: יְשׁוּעָת salvation
                suffix-pronoun: ִי me
      Fragment
        Clause     
          Predicate
            verb: צָעַקְתִּי I have been crying out   
            Adverbial <gloss="in the day" y="-20">
              noun: יוֹם day
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: צָעַקְתִּי I have been crying out <status="elided">
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: נֶגְדֶּ before
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="at night">
                Preposition
                  preposition: בַ in
                Object
                  article: הַ the <status="elided">
                  noun: לַּיְלָה night 
  


Notes

Grammar Notes

  • v. 2b The preferred reading follows the one found in most modern translations and which sounds more plausible content-wise being a merism (‘day and night’). It is still a difficult reading for two reasons: (a) יוֹם used adverbially without a preposition, which does not seem to be attested elsewhere in the Bible; (b) יוֹם... לַיְלָה are asyndetic and separated from each other, a very unusual construction. We therefore analyse this hard verse as made of two asyndetic clauses, with the verb elided in the second one, to get "I have been crying out by day [and I have been crying] at night before you". For the sake of simplicity though, we rendered this verse in the CBC as "I have been crying out day and night before you". BHS emends MT to אֱלֹהַי שִׁוַּעְתִּי יוֹמָ֑ם צַעֲקָתִי בַלַּיְלָה נֶגְדֶּךָ with dittography assumed in יְשׁוּעָתִי and haplography in יוֹם, but that reading is not supported by any of the Ancient Versions.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 2 alt 1.jpg

  • v. 2b alt #1 This alternative is similar in meaning to the preferred reading, but assuming one clause, with יום and לילה being separated and asyndetic, and yet forming one phrase, which is less plausible than our preferred reading.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 2 alt 2.jpg

  • v. 2b alt #2 This reading is suggested by NLT, GNT and ZÜR, and may also be understood that way in LXX. It considers this verse as made of two asyndetic clauses, with the second one being a nominal one with an adverbial predicate ("I am before you at night"). It is less preferable semantically, as it abolishes the elegant merism and in general makes less sense ("crying in the day while [standing] in front of YHWH at night"). Another fact that speaks against this reading (namely, two distinct clauses) is the absence in MT of a dagesh lene in the ב of בלילה and the conjunctive accent (טרחא) in preceding word צָעַקְתִּי.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 2 alt 3.jpg

  • v. 2b alt #3 Alternative is suggested by both Targum and NET, but not supported by either the MT or LXX and may therefore be a case of intentional emendation or harmonisation with the next verse, that has the explicit noun תְּפִלָּתִי in both MT and LXX.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 2 alt 4.jpg

  • v. 2b & v. 3a alt #4 Alternative is suggested by CEV and NRSV. This reading assumes 2b to be a subordinate temporal clause of the main clause in 3a. It is thus understood as "When at night I cry out before you, may my prayer come before you!" The syntactic structure underlying this reading is of a construct chain with a verb, namely a predicate, as the nomen rectum. This particular usage of the construct chain is very common with time-determinators as nomen regens, and particularly following בְּיוֹם (N.B. our verse lacks the preposition), cf. Gesenius §131d. Interesting similar cases in Psalms are 102:3 and 56:10.
No Lexical notes to display for Psalm 88:2.

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 2: בַלַּיְלָה
This prepositional phrase refers here not to one night in particular, but by virtue of the article to all nights (in an habitual sense).

Verbal Notes

  • The lack of movement and the context, which indicates an habitual process, prompts us to render צָעַקְתִּי in English as a present perfect progressive.



Vv. 3-4


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [vv. 3-4]
      Fragment
        ClauseCluster
          Clause
            Subject
              ConstructChain <gloss="my prayer">
                noun: תְּפִלָּתִ prayer
                suffix-pronoun: י me
            Predicate <gloss="may find favor with you">
              verb: תָּבוֹא may come
              Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: לְפָנֶי before
                  Object
                    suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
          Clause
            Predicate
              verb: הַטֵּה incline
              Object
                ConstructChain <gloss="your ear">
                  noun: אָזְנְ ear
                  suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
              Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: לְ to
                  Object
                    ConstructChain <gloss="my cry">
                      noun: רִנָּתִ shout >> cry
                      suffix-pronoun: י me
            SubordinateClause  
              Conjunction
                conjunction: כִּי for
              ClauseCluster
                Clause
                  Subject
                    ConstructChain <gloss="I">
                      noun: נַפְשִׁ soul >> 'personal pronoun'
                      suffix-pronoun: י me
                  Predicate
                    verb: שָׂבְעָה has one's fill >> is weary
                    Adverbial
                      PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="of troubles" >
                        Preposition
                          preposition: בְ in
                        Object
                          noun: רָעוֹת troubles
                Conjunction
                  conjunction: וְ and
                Clause
                  Subject
                    ConstructChain <gloss="my life">
                      noun: חַיַּ life
                      suffix-pronoun: י me
                  Predicate
                    verb: הִגִּיעוּ has reached
                    Adverbial
                      PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="Sheol">
                        Preposition
                          preposition: לִ to
                        Object
                          noun: שְׁאוֹל Sheol 
  


Notes

Grammar Notes

  • v. 4b חַיַּי The noun חַיִּים "life" is pluralia tantum, i.e. a noun used in the plural only, with no singular form attested. Most of these nouns are abstract in meaning (JM §90f); cf. note on תוֹעֵבוֹת in v. 9b.

Lexical Notes

  • v. 4: נפש as a substitute for personal pronoun
"The נפשׁ as the essential of man stands for the man himself > paraphrase for pers. pron. especially in poetry and ornate discourse" (BDB), cf. Psa 11:1; 7:3. Most translations keep the literal phrase "my soul" (ESV), some understand it as a personal pronoun (CEV, NIV).

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 3: לְפָנֶיךָ
The idiom בָּא לִפְנֵי is understood following Gesenius' definition as "find favor / be approved with someone" (Gesenius Hebrew Dictionary on לִפְנֵי: "in the presence of --> Fig. with the approval of (since we only put those things which please us before our eyes)", e.g. יִֽהְי֥וּ לְרָצ֨וֹן׀ אִמְרֵי־פִ֡י וְהֶגְי֣וֹן לִבִּ֣י לְפָנֶ֑יךָ Ps 19:15 "May the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be pleasing to you, O LORD," (NLT).
Still, the preposition here is analyzed in its concrete non-figurative sense from which the idiom is derived.

Verbal Notes

  • Imperatives and jussives, such as תָּבוֹא and הַטֵּה, default to reference point movement (unless they're imperfective, e.g. 'keep on eating!').
  • The verb שָׂבְעָה is morphologically and semantically a stative, and so the qatal' is taken to stand for a present state. BDB understands all instances of this verb as statives, rather than inchoatives.
  • The lack of reference-point movement with הִגִּיעוּ prompts us to render this in English as a present perfect (instead of a simple past).



V. 5


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 5]
Fragment
  Clause
    Predicate
      verb: נֶחְשַׁבְתִּי I have been counted >> I am counted
      Adverbial
        PrepositionalPhrase
          Preposition
            preposition: עִם with
          Object
            ConstructChain <gloss="those who go down to the Pit">
              Nominal
                verb-participle: יוֹרְדֵי  going down
              Nominal          
                noun: בוֹר Pit
Fragment
  Clause
    Predicate
      verb: הָיִיתִי I have become
      Complement
        Adjectival
          PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="just like a man">
            Preposition
              preposition: כְּ as
            Object
              Nominal
                noun: גֶבֶר man
                RelativeClause
                  RelativeParticle <status="elided">
                    particle: אֲשֵׁר that
                  Clause
                    Subject
                      noun: אֱיָל strength
                    Predicate <gloss="who has no strength">
                      adverb: אֵין there is no
                      Adverbial
                        PrepositionalPhrase <status="elided">
                          Preposition
                            preposition: ל to            
                          Object  
                            suffix-pronoun: וֹ him <located="relative clause head"> 
  


Notes

Grammar Notes

  • v. 5b The relative clause here is asyndetic, with the retrospective pronoun לוֹ being omitted, common in poetry (JM §158c).

Lexical Notes

  • v. 5a: בּוֹר
Many translations take בור literally as pit, translating the phrase as "those who go down to the pit" (NIV,ESV), some capitalize the word "those who go down to the Pit" (ISV), and some understand it metaphorically as "those who go down to the grave" (NET). Here the explicit translation is preferred.
Psalm 088 - Bor - pit.jpg
  • v. 5: The meaning of אֱיָל
The noun אֱיָל is a hapax legomenonThat is, the term only occurs once in Biblical Hebrew. in the Bible. It is derived of the root אול with the primary polysemous meanings of "to be in front"/"to be strong"; comp. אֵל "god"; Arb. ʾawwal "first" (HALOT). BDB takes this noun as a loan-word from Aramaic with the meaning "help" (comp. Syr. ʾiyālā "help"). Also noteworthy is the derived noun אֱיָלוּת (Ps 22:20), also a hapax legomenon, which in the context of its psalm probably means "help". The noun אֱיָל is read as such in LXX (ἄνθρωπος ἀβοήθητος "a helpless man") and Peshitta (see ʾiyālā above). On the other hand, The Vulgate iuxta Hebr. has invalidus ("impotent") so as Targum which has בר נש דלית ליה חילא ("a man who has no strength").
We prefer to follow Tate 1990, 396 who, like the Vulgate and Targum, reads אֱיָל as "strength". This reading, etymologically justified (see above), fits in better with the direct context: the noun גֶּבֶר (in contrast to אִישׁ) is often marked in terms of qualities of manhood such as courage and strength (see Venn Diagram below). The reading of אֱיָל as strength is backed by most modern translations (NIV, NLT, ESV, NKJV et alia).
  • v. 5: גֶּבֶר
Psalm 088 - Gever - man.jpg
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:5.

Verbal Notes

  • Verbs of perception in qatal often have present tense stative value. Modern translations all render נֶחְשַׁבְתִּי as a present state.
  • The attributive participle יוֹרְדֵי is not marked in terms of tense or aspect, and since the context is not decisive enough here, there are various options. Tate (1990:396) suggests an attractive reading of the participle as an imminent future ('those about to go to the Pit'). Nevertheless we take the consensual choice among Modern Translations to read that participle as a present gnomic one. This is further backed by the Greek and Latin present participle καταβαινόντων and descendentibus.
  • The verb הָיָה is either stative ('to be') or dynamic-inchoative ('to become'). A qatal present stative is rare (cf. JM §111i, Gen 42:31), therfore we choose the inchoative reading, supported by Goldingay:2007; Dahood:1974. Cf. also Gen 3:22.



V. 6


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 6]
      Fragment
        Clause
          Subject
            noun: אֲנִי I <status="elided">
          Predicate
            Complement
              adjective: חָפְשִׁי free >> outcast
              Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="among the dead">
                  Preposition
                    preposition: בַּ in
                  Object
                    article: הַ the <status="elided">
                    noun: מֵּתִים dead ones
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="just like the slain">
                Preposition
                  preposition: כְּמוֹ as
                Object
                  Nominal
                    noun: חֲלָלִים slain ones
                    Adjectival
                      ConstructChain <gloss="who are lying in the tomb">
                        verb-participle: שֹׁכְבֵי lying
                        noun: קֶבֶר tomb
                    RelativeClause
                      RelativeParticle
                        particle: אֲשֵׁר that
                      ClauseCluster           
                        Clause
                          Predicate <gloss="whom you do not remember anymore">
                            verb: זְכַרְתָּ you have remembered >> you remember
                            Object
                              suffix-pronoun: ם them <located="relative clause head">
                            adverb: לֹא not
                            adverb: עוֹד anymore
                        Conjunction
                          conjunction: וְ and
                        Clause
                          Subject
                            noun: הֵמָּה they
                          Predicate <gloss="and [who] have been cut off">
                            verb: נִגְזָרוּ have been cut off
                            Adverbial
                              PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="from your care">
                                Preposition
                                  preposition: מִ from
                                Object
                                  Nominal
                                    ConstructChain
                                      noun: יָּדְ hand >> care
                                      suffix-pronoun: ךָ you 
  


Notes

Grammar Notes

  • v. 5b-6 The preferred reading follows the MT division between vv. 5 and 6, the same one that is found in Jerome, Peshitta, TgPs and reflected by almost all Modern translations. We prefer to maintain this division between v.5 and v.6, as the clause במתים חפשי is strongly related to the content of v. 6: חפשי and חללים both designate the lowest rank among the dead (cf. Hossfeld and Zenger 2005, 395). Additionally, 2 Chr 26:21 offers an interesting relation between בית החפשית and the verb נגזר (similarly to what we see in v. 6). For further discussion on v. 6, see The Meaning of חָפְשִׁי in Ps 88:6.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 5b-6.jpg

  • v. 5b-6 alt #1 Alternative follows the division between vs. 5 and 6 as found in the LXX only and which takes במתים חפשי as part of the previous clause in v. 5b, instead of its own new clause.

Lexical Notes

  • v. 6: The meaning of חָפְשִׁי
For a detailed description, see The Meaning of חָפְשִׁי in Ps 88:6.

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 6: The metaphor יַד יהוה
The "hand of God" is used as an anthropomorphising metaphor, in most cases with relation to strength, power and punishment. In the books of Ezra and Nehemiah in particular we find that metaphor with the meaning of God's aid, care or providence, e.g. בָּא אֶל-יְרוּשָׁלִַם כְּיַד-אֱלֹהָיו הַטּוֹבָה עָלָיו (Ezra 7:9) "he arrived in Jerusalem... since the beneficent hand of his God was upon him." (ISV) . We prefer to read this metaphor in a similar way in our verse too, backed by some of the modern translations as well (NIV, NLT, CSB).

Verbal Notes

  • The attributive participle שֹׁכְבֵי is not marked in terms of tense or aspect. We take the relative tense here to be simultaneous with a stative aspect, backed by LXX καθεύδοντες and Jerome dormientes present participles.
  • Verbs of perception in qatal like זְכַרְתָּם often have present tense stative value. "Active verbs which have a stative or quasi-stative meaning are treated like stative verbs. They are mainly verbs expressing a state of mind... Likewise the verb זָכַר is treated like a stative verb, e.g. זָכַרְנוּ 'we remember'" (JM 2018: 112a). Modern translations also all render it as a present state.
  • The lack of movement prompts us to render נִגְזָרוּ in English as a present perfect (instead of a simple past).



V. 7


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 7]
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: שַׁתַּ you have put
            Object
              suffix-pronoun: נִי me
            Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: בְּ in
                  Object
                    ConstructChain <gloss="the lowest pit" x="-120" y="30">
                      noun: בוֹר pit
                      Nominal
                        adjective: תַּחְתִּיּוֹת lowest
              Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: בְּ in
                  Object
                    noun: מַחֲשַׁכִּים dark places
              Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: בִּ in
                  Object
                    noun: מְצֹלוֹת watery depths
              Adverbial <status="emendation alternative">
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: בְּ in
                  Object
                    noun: צַלְמָוֶת deep shadow 
  


Notes

Grammar & Textual Notes

  • v. 7 בִּמְצֹלוֹת LXX and Peshitta have the alternative metathetic reading בְּצַלְמָוֶת. Although this reading is viable and fits perfectly within the context, we prefer to keep the MT reading, because of the recurring motif in the psalm of "water" as one of the major elements mentioned in the metaphorical description of the psalmist's miserable condition (cf. vv. 8, 18), neatly complementing the two other elements mentioned in our verse, namely the "pit" and the "darkness." (cf. Poetic Feature "The primordial elements").

Lexical Notes

  • v. 7: The meaning of תַּחְתִּיּוֹת
The substantivized adjective תַּחְתִּי, always in abstract feminine form (either singular or plural) is a superlative of place: “the bottom of” (lit. “the lowest/deepest place of”), e.g. תַחְתִּית הָהָר “the foot of the mountain”, Exod 19:17. In our verse it may be understood as “a pit which is situated at the lowest places”. This phrase, as well as the similar אֶרֶץ תַּחְתִּית orאֶרֶץ תַּחְתִּיּוֹת is often a synonym of the Sheol. In Ezek 31:14 the latter stands parallel to יוֹרְדֵי בוֹר (cf. vs. 5).
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:7.

Verbal Notes

  • The lack of movement prompts us to render שַׁתַּנִי in English as a present perfect (instead of a simple past).



V. 8


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 8]
      Fragment
        Clause
          Subject
            ConstructChain  <gloss="your outbursts of wrath">
              noun: חֲמָתֶ wrath >> outbursts of wrath
              suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
          Predicate
            verb: סָמְכָה has been lying heavily >> have been lying heavily
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: עָלַ on
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: י me
        Conjunction
          conjunction: וְ and
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: עִנִּיתָ you have been afflicting
            Adverbial
              Nominal <gloss="with all your waves">
                quantifier: כָל all
                ConstructChain <gloss="your waves">
                  noun: מִשְׁבָּרֶי waves
                  suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
      Fragment
        particle: סֶּלָה selah 
  


Notes

No Grammar notes to display for Psalm 88:8.

Lexical Notes

  • v. 8: חֲמָתֶךָ
The whole clause depicts a very material picture in which the wrath of YHWH weighs (or lies heavily) upon the psalmist. That requires a rephrasing of the simple "wrath" into "the outbursts of wrath", namely the "materialistic" form that YHWH's wrath assumes. Same comment for חֲרוֹנֶיךָ in v. 17.
  • v. 8: סָמְכָה
The most common use of this verb is in the collocation סָמַךְ יָדוֹ עַל said of the priest laying or leaning his hand on the sacrifice (e.g. Exod 29:10). Our verse has an intransitive occurrence of that verb, which is also found in Ezek 24:2, in which it is said that the king of Babylon "leaned" against Jerusalem, namely started a siege over it. Both Ezek 24:2 and our verse have in common the oppressive nature of the leaning, and we therefore gloss the verb in our verse as "lies heavily on" (cf. Ps 32.4).
  • v. 8: ענה
Psalm 088 - Anah - afflict.jpg
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:8.

Verbal Notes

  • The lack of movement and an habitual process prompts us to render סָמְכָה in English as a present perfect progressive.
  • The lack of movement and an habitual process prompts us to render עִנִּיתָ in English as a present perfect progressive.



V. 9


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 9]
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate <gloss="you have caused to shun me">
            verb: הִרְחַקְתָּ you have made distant >> you have caused to shun
            Object
              ConstructChain <gloss="my acquaintances">
                verb-participle: מְיֻדָּעַ acquaintances
                suffix-pronoun: י me
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: מִמֶּ from
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: נִּי me
      Fragment  
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: שַׁתַּ you have made
            Object
              suffix-pronoun: נִי me
            Complement
              noun: תוֹעֵבוֹת abominations >> repulsive
              Adjectival
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: לָ to
                  Object
                    suffix-pronoun: מוֹ them
      Fragment  
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: שַׁתַּ you have made <status='elided'>
            Object
              suffix-pronoun: נִי me <status='elided'>
            Complement
              Nominal
                verb-participle: כָּלֻא shut in
        Conjunction
          conjunction: וְ and
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: אֵצֵא I can get out
            adverb: לֹא not 
  


Notes

Grammar & Textual Notes

  • v. 9b תּוֹעֵבוֹת The noun תּוֹעֵבוֹת in our verse is in plural of abstraction: "An abstract noun is quite often expressed by a plural, which properly speaking aims at the various concrete manifestations of a quality or of a state" (JM §136g-h). LXX has a singular noun for תּוֹעֵבוֹת, perhaps so as to bring about agreement between the subject of the verbal notion of the noun תּוֹעֵבָה and the psalmist (singular).
  • v. 9c The last clause (starting with כָּלֻא) is elliptical in terms of subject and verb. The preferred interpretation considers שַׁתַּנִי as the underlying verb, with כָּלֻא an object complement. This interpretation was chosen for the sake of harmony with the first part of the verse, with YHWH serving as subject and active agent of all three actions (cf. also the refuting argument for the alternative just below).

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 9c alt.jpg

  • v. 9c alt The alternative reading assumes a nominal clause with an underlying pronominal subject אֲנִי understood. Although supported by most modern translations (+LXX) it seems less desirable, as a nominal clause with an elided subject is rare when not preceded by הנה and not in third person (JM §154c). This is enhanced by the fact that such a reading would entail a change of subject that would have been expected to be overtly marked (YHWH --> I)
No Lexical notes to display for Psalm 88:9.

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 9: מִמֶּנִּי
The English verb "to shun" takes the accusative, but the Hebrew one is derived of the root רחק and thus retains its argument with the preposition מ of alienation (i.e. distance oneself from >> shun; cf. van der Merwe §39.14.3).

Verbal Notes

  • The lack of movement prompts us to render הִרְחַקְתָּ in English as a present perfect (instead of a simple past).
  • The lack of movement prompts us to render שַׁתַּנִי in English as a present perfect (instead of a simple past). "The Qal passive participle mostly denotes a completed action or a state" (cf. JM §121q).
  • The combination of the dynamic verb שַׁתַּנִי (read as a present perfect like in the previous line) with the passive participle כָּלֻא, a present simultaneous stative, prompts us to translate the clause as 'you have shut me in [so that until now I am shut in]'."
  • The modality of 'possibility' for אֵצֵֽא is understood as a combination of posteriority & reference point movement, since 'possibility' is analyzed as a semantic derivative of futurity ('I will go out at any point in the future' --> 'I am able to go out now').



V. 10


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 10]
      Fragment
        Clause
          Subject
            ConstructChain <gloss="my eyes">
              noun: עֵינִ eye >> eyes
              suffix-pronoun: י me
          Predicate
            verb: דָאֲבָה has languished >> have languished
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: מִנִּי from
                Object
                  noun: עֹנִי misery
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: קְרָאתִי I have been calling
            Object
              suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase <gloss="every day">
                Preposition
                  preposition: בְּ in
                Object
                  quantifier: כָל every
                  noun: יוֹם day
      Fragment
        Vocative
          noun: יְהוָה YHWH
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: שִׁטַּחְתִּי I have been spreading out
            Object
              ConstructChain <gloss="my hands">
                noun: כַפָּ hands
                suffix-pronoun: י me
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: אֵלֶי to
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: ךָ you 
  


Notes

Grammar Notes

  • v.10 מֶנִּי The form מֶנִּי, common in the Psalms, is a poetic variant of the preposition מִן with the addition of a paragogic yod (cf. JM §103d).

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 10 alt1.jpg

  • v. 10 alt #1 Alternative offers a viable reading not attested by any ancient version or modern translation. In addition to that, the following facts speak against this reading:
  1. דָאֲבָה and עֹנִי belong to the same contextual domain.
  2. The root עני is repeated three times, and always in the "complaining" parts, never in the framing statements of appeal (vv. 2-3, 10b-c, 14).
  3. v. 10a and 10b will be less balanced in terms of poetic words if we take מִנִּי עֹנִי to be part of 10b.
  4. The atnah at בְּכָל-יוֹם is a strong indication for this phrase to be considered as part of 10b, not 10c.

Lexical Notes

  • v. 10: singular of עַיִן standing for the plural
The singular of עַיִן may stand in poetry for both eyes, e.g. פַּלְגֵי-מַיִם תֵּרַד עֵינִי עַל-שֶׁבֶר בַּת-עַמִּי. (Lam 3:48) "Streams of tears flow from my eyes because my people are destroyed." (NIV), in which only one eye crying is obviously impossible. It can also be seen in various idioms such as שָֹם עֵינוֹ עַל (to look to one's good); רָעָה עֵֵינוֹֹ עַל (envy). The plural is therefore the preferred reading in our verse too, supported by LXX.

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 10: עֵינִי דָאֲבָה
The rare verb דָאַב normally denotes the languishing of the soul (נֶפֶשׁ) (cf. Deut 28:65; Jer 31:11, 24). It is only in our verse that this verb describes the eye. However, "The 'eye(s)' is a synecdoche for the whole person, an indicator of the vitality and health of a person (cf. 1Sam 14:27, 29; Deut 34:7; Ps 19:9; Ezra 9:8) or of the lack of vitality and of depleted strength (Gen 27:1; Job 17:7; Ps 6:8; 38:11; Lam 5:17)" (Goldingay 2007). The choice of eye instead of soul in our verse was probably motivated by the intended pun between עֵינִי and עֹנִי in the same line. Both LXX (ἠσθένησαν) and Jerome (langŭērunt) render this verb with an equivalent of the general verb "to languish" or "to become weak". We therefore prefer the more general "languishes" to the translation suggested by some modern translations with the more specific "grows dim", which is restricted to the eyes only.

Verbal Notes

  • Morphologically and semantically a stative verb, the qatal דָאֲבָה is taken in this case to stand for a perfect inchoative ('languished'), as is rendered by many modern translations and commentaries.
  • The lack of movement & an habitual process (indicated by the context) prompts us to render קְרָאתִיךָ in English as a present perfect progressive.
  • The lack of movement & an habitual process (indicated by the context) prompts us to render שִׁטַּחְתִּי in English as a present perfect progressive.



V. 11


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 11]
      Fragment
        particle: הֲ (interrogative particle)
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: תַּעֲשֶׂה you perform
            Object
              noun: פֶּלֶא wonder >> wonders
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: לַ for
                Object
                  Nominal
                    article: הַ the <status="elided">
                    noun: מֵּתִים dead ones
      Fragment
        particle: אִם (interrogative particle)
      Fragment
        Clause
          Subject
            noun: רְפָאִים departed spirits
          Predicate <gloss="rise up to praise you">
            Predicate
              verb: יָקוּמוּ rise up
            Conjunction
              conjunction:
            Predicate
              verb: יוֹדוּ [and] praise >> to praise
              Object
                suffix-pronoun: ךָ you    
      Fragment
        particle: סֶּלָה selah 
  


Notes

Grammar & Textual Notes

  • v. 11: הֲ - אִם construction Both הֲ and אִם are taken as interrogative particles, working on the higher level of discourse. אִם is commonly found in disjunctive yes/no mutually exclusive questions ("is it X or Y?"). In few cases in the Bible we find אִם functioning as an independent interrogative particle, namely neither in a disjunctive nor in a conditional clause setting, but introducing an independent clause of its own (1Kings 1:27; Is 29:16), which strongly suggests that it can function other than as a subordinating conjunction (cf. JM §161d-e). We therefore give it a particle status in our analysis.
  • v. 11b The verbal sequence יָקוּמוּ יוֹדוּךָ is analyzed as an (asyndetic) hendiadys.
  • The word סֶּלָה is absent in LXX.
  • vv. 11-13: The rhetorical function of the disjunctive question of the הֲ... אִם...  type
“A disjunctive question is sometimes a mere stylistic feature, used in cases of synonymous parallelism... especially in poetry” (Joüon-Muraoka §161e). The rhetorical force of such constructions is that of a strong negation implied. This explains the additional “No!” in brackets in the paraphrase. It is important to convey the function of that particular formation to our translator teams.

Lexical Notes

  • v. 11, 13 : singular of פֶּלֶא as a collective noun
We find in poetry the singular of פֶּלֶא representing the totality of wonders that have been performed by God, e.g. אֶזְכּוֹר מַעַלְלֵי-יָהּ כִּי-אֶזְכְּרָה מִקֶּדֶם פִּלְאֶךָ (Psa 77:12) "I will remember the deeds of the LORD; yes, I will remember your wonders of old" (ESV), in which פֶּלֶא stands parallel to the plural מַעַלְלֵי-יָהּ. The plural reading is backed by the ancient translations.
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:11.

Verbal Notes

  • The lack of reference point movement and gnomic aspect prompt us to translate תַּעֲשֶׂה in English as a simple present tense. The same analysis applies to the next verses 11b-12.
  • The hendiadys יָקוּמוּ יוֹדוּךָ should be rendered in translation by a subordination of the second verb to the first one. In many languages the former may be best rendered by an infinitive ("to praise you").



V. 12


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 12]
      Fragment
        particle: הַ (interrogative particle)
      Fragment
        ClauseCluster
          Clause
            Subject
              ConstructChain <gloss="your faithful love">
                noun: חַסְדֶּ faithful love
                suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
            Predicate
              verb: יְסֻפַּר is recounted
              Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: בַּ in
                  Object
                    Nominal
                      article: הַ the <status="elided">
                      noun: קֶּבֶר tomb
          Conjunction
            conjunction: וֶ <status="elided">
          Clause
            Subject
              ConstructChain <gloss="your faithfulness">
                noun: אֱמוּנָתְ faithfulness
                suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
            Predicate
              verb: תְּסֻפַּר is recounted <status="elided">
              Adverbial
                PrepositionalPhrase
                  Preposition
                    preposition: בָּ in
                  Object
                    Nominal
                      article: הָ the <status="elided">
                      noun: אֲבַדּוֹן place of destruction 
  


Notes

Grammar Notes

  • v. 12 Just like in v. 13, the interrogative particle הֲ spans over both parts of the disjunctive question. In fact, the question here is merely rhetoric and not disjunctive: "Double questions... need not always be mutually exclusive; frequently the disjunctive form serves (especially in poetic parallelism) merely to repeat the same question in different words, and thus to express it more emphatically... The second member may, therefore, just as well be connected by a simple וְ" (Gesenius §150h). We therefore assume an elided waw here, like the one explicit in v. 13. This waw is also attested in LXX and some Hebrew manuscripts.

Lexical Notes

  • v. 12: אֲבַדּוֹן
The verbal noun אֲבַדּוֹן, literally "destruction" (cf. Job 31:12) is likewise translated in LXX and Jerome. However, in most other places it is metonymically used as "place of destruction" with clear reference to death, and is so translated by Targum as "the house of destruction". We find an ambiguity with some places identifying this "place of destruction" as the underworld (cf. Prov 15:11; Job 26:6), while in our verse it stands parallel to the physical tomb itself. "Physically, it means being in the grave, which is itself visibly the place of destruction. As a term for Sheol, Destruction, too, comes only here in the Psalms (but see Job 28:22; Prov. 15:11)... When you take the rock off a tomb to put another body there, you can see that death is a place of destruction. The body dissolves" (Goldingay 2007).

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 12: בַּקֶּבֶר
Taking the context into account, בַּקֶּבֶר can be understood metonymically as the "realm of the dead", in which case the definite article is semantically interpreted as "Identifiability - unique referent".

Verbal Notes

  • The lack of reference point movement & gnomic aspect prompt us to translate יְסֻפַּר in English as a simple present tense.



V. 13


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 13]   
      Fragment
        particle: הֲ /interrogative particle\
      Fragment  
        Clause
          Subject
            ConstructChain <gloss="your wonders">
              noun: פִּלְאֶ wonder >> wonders
              suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
          Predicate
            verb: יִוָּדַע can be known
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: בַּ in
                Object
                  Nominal
                    article: הַ the <status="elided">
                    noun: חֹשֶׁךְ darkness >> dark region
        Conjunction
          conjunction: וְ and
        Clause
          Subject
            ConstructChain <gloss="your righteousness">
              noun: צִדְקָתְ righteousness
              suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
          Predicate
            verb: תִּוָּדַע can be known <status="elided">
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: בְּ in
                Object
                  ConstructChain <gloss="the land of oblivion">
                    noun: אֶרֶץ land
                    noun: נְשִׁיָּה oblivion 
  


Notes

No Grammar notes to display for Psalm 88:13.

Lexical Notes

  • v. 11, 13: singular of פֶּלֶא as a collective noun
See note under v. 11.
  • v. 13: חֹשֶׁךְ used figuratively
The direct context of חֹשֶׁךְ, namely vv. 12-13 each of which appear in parallel, reveals a sequence of places which serve as the locations of each its respective clauses: בקבר, באבדון and בארץ נשיה. It therefore calls for a similar reading of בחשך, metonymically, as "place of darkness" or "dark region" referring to the world of the dead, rather than as a natural phenomenon in our world, namely "at night, when it's dark". This reading is backed by NET and NIV.

Phrase-Level Notes

  • v. 13: אֶרֶץ נְשִׁיָּה
LXX has a passive participle "a forgotten land" (καὶ ἡ δικαιοσύνη σου ἐν γῇ ἐπιλελησμένῃ;), which strengthens the semantic analysis of this construct chain as of a verb with its object. The Hebrew noun נְשִׁיָּה itself is a verbal noun of the קְטִילָה pattern derived from the root נשי ('forget').

Verbal Notes

  • The modality of 'possibility' for יִוָּדַע is understood as a combination of posteriority & reference point movement, since 'possibility' is analyzed as a semantic derivative of futurity ('Your wonders will be known at any point in the future' --> 'Your wonders are able to be known now').



V. 14


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 14]    
      Fragment
        particle: וַ but
      Fragment
        Vocative
          noun: יְהוָה YHWH
      Fragment
        Clause
          Subject
            noun: אֲנִי I
          Predicate
            verb: שִׁוַּעְתִּי have been crying out for help
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase            
                Preposition
                  preposition: אֵלֶי to
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
        Conjunction
          conjunction: וּ and
        Clause
          Subject
            ConstructChain <gloss="my prayer">
              noun: תְּֽפִלָּתִ prayer
              suffix-pronoun: י me
          Predicate
            verb: תְקַדְּמֶ will keep welcoming
            Object
              suffix-pronoun: ךָּ you
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: בַ in
                Object
                  article: הַ the <status="elided">
                  noun: בֹּקֶר morning 
  


Notes

Note for V. 14

  • The waw opening the verse is not understood as a coordinative one connecting v.14 with v.13, but as a marker of a topic-shift (אני), beginning a new section in the psalm. It is therefore represented in the diagram as an element belonging to clause-level.
No Lexical notes to display for Psalm 88:14.
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:14.

Note for V. 14

  • The lack of movement and an habitual process (indicated by the context) prompts us to render שִׁוַּעְתִּי in English as a present perfect progressive.
  • The lack of reference point movement and yiqtol verbal form prompt us to read תְקַדְּמֶךָּ as an imperfective future with implied habituality that is anchored in the present: "my prayer will keep welcoming you, as it has up until now."



V. 15


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 15]
      Fragment
        Vocative
          noun: יְהוָה YHWH
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: תִּזְנַח you keep rejecting
            adverb: לָמָה why
            Object
              ConstructChain <gloss="me">
                noun: נַפְשִׁ soul >> 'personal pronoun'
                suffix-pronoun: י me
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: תַּסְתִּיר you keep hiding
            adverb: לָמָה why <status='elided'>
            Object
              ConstructChain <gloss="your face">
                noun: פָּנֶי face
                suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: מִמֶּ from
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: נִּי me 
  


Notes

No Grammar notes to display for Psalm 88:15.
No Lexical notes to display for Psalm 88:15.
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:15.

Note for V. 15

The lack of reference point movement and yiqtol verbal forms prompt us to translate תִּזְנַח and תַּסְתִּיר in English as relative imperfective present tenses, with implied continuity (not habituality), to get 'keep doing...'.



V. 16


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 16]
      Fragment  [v. 16a]
        Clause
          Subject
            noun: אֲנִי I
          Predicate
            Complement
              adjective: עָנִי am afflicted >> have been afflicted
              conjunction: וְ and
              verb-participle: גוֵעַ am close to death >> have been close to death
              conjunction:
              verb-participle: יָגֵעַ am weary >> have been weary <status="alternative emendation">
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase  
                Preposition
                  preposition: מִ from
                Object
                  noun: נֹּעַר youth
      Fragment  [v. 16b]
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: נָשָׂאתִי I have been bearing >> I have been suffering
            Object
              ConstructChain <gloss="your terrifying assaults">
                noun: אֵמֶי terrors >> terrifying assaults
                suffix-pronoun: ךָ you    
      Fragment [v. 16c]  
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: אֶפּוֹרָה  I keep being torn apart <status="emendation">
            verb: אָפוּגָה  I keep being numb <status="alternative emendation">
            verb: אָפוּנָה  <status="alternative"> 
  


Notes

Note for V. 16

  • v. 16 יָגֵעַ LXX, Jerome, and Peshitta have יָגֵעַ instead of גֹּוֵעַ. We consider the former a dispreferred emendation, as גוע is lectio difficilior. The reason is that גוע, a perfective glossed as "expire one's last breath" is not attested anywhere in the Bible in its participle form. This would turn it into an imperfective-telic verb ("to be about to expire one's last breath"), a hard but very possible (and highly graphic) reading. In addition to that, since the psalm is obsessive with the idea of death, we take גוע as the preferred reading, also supported by all modern translations.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 16b alt.jpg

  • v. 16b alt #1 נִשֵֹּאתִי אִמָּךָ Alternative is based on the LXX (ὑψωθεὶς δὲ ἐταπεινώθην) and Peshitta (ܐܬܬܪܝܡܬ ܘܐܬܡܟܟܬ), which can be translated as: ‘I'm lifted up and (then) brought low’. The alternative is made possible through a revocalisation of both words: נִשֵֹּאתִי is read as a Niph'al verb instead of Qal, while אִמָּךָ is read as a Niph'al verb of the root מככ (‘be brought low, humiliated’) instead of the noun אֵמֶיךָ, with an omission of the mater lectionis in the MT. This reading is dispreferred as it is not clear how ‘being lifted up’ is compatible with the message of the psalm, especially as the preceding line is emphasizing how he's been afflicted since youth. The MT text, on the other hand, fits well with the psalm's message.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 16c.jpg

  • v. 16c אָפוּנָה The MT reading אָפוּנָה from the unattested root פונ is emended here to אֶפּוֹרָה from the root פור (cognate to פרר "tear/break") to get "I keep being torn apart") in Niphal. This text is attested in 4Q98c, which Longacre and Strawn (2022) argue is part of the proto-Massoretic 4Q85. Skehan et al. (2000) explains LXX ἐξηπορήθην "I am desperate" as onomatopoeia for the 4Q98c reading, although the meaning is different. BHS suggests an emendation to אָפוּגָה "I keep being numb" from the root פוג, which otherwise it not supported by any version and fits in less with the context. For a full analysis of this line, see The Text and Meaning of Ps. 88:16b.

Note for V. 16

  • v. 16: אֵמָיךָ
In a similar way to the analysis of חֲמָתֶךָ in v. 8, the general term אֵמִים "terrors" could be better rephrased in a materialistic and countable form of e.g. "terrifying assaults". The same goes for בִּעוּתֶיךָ in the next verse, a synonym of אֵמָיךָ.
  • v. 16b: The form and meaning of the verb אֶפּוֹרָה
For a detailed analysis, see The Text and Meaning of Ps. 88:16b.
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:16.

Note for V. 16

  • A nominal clause in v. 16a has the implied semantics in grey (see next line for an explanation of the analysis).
  • The participle גֹוֵעַ indicates an on-going state that started in the past and has been extending continuously until the present point. It is best rendered in English with a present perfect continuos tense, but may be rendered with other tenses in other languages (for example, with a present tense)
  • The lack of movement and an habitual process (indicated by the context) prompts us to render נָשָׂאתִי in English as a present perfect progressive.
  • Formally identical to a cohortative form, we understand אֶפּוֹרָה semantically as a yiqtol one and prefer to take the paragogic ה as a stylistic coloring, rather than a cohortative marker: "... forms chosen merely for euphony... due to considerations of rhythm" (Gesenius §108g); cf. also JM §114c, footnote #3). Similar instances, all from poetry, are Jer 4:21, 6:10, Ps 57:5. ** for emendation see exegetical issue on v. 16d (MT: אָפֽוּנָה)



V. 17


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 17]
    Fragment
      Clause
        Subject
          ConstructChain <gloss="your outbursts of wrath">
            noun: חֲרוֹנֶי wrath >> outbursts of wrath
            suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
        Predicate <gloss="have been sweeping over me" x="-130" y="-60">
          verb: עָבְרוּ have been sweeping over
          Adverbial
            PrepositionalPhrase            
              Preposition
                preposition: עָלַ on
              Object
                suffix-pronoun: י me
    Fragment  
      Clause
        Subject
          ConstructChain <gloss="your terrifying assaults">
            noun: בִּעוּתֶי terrors >> terrifying assaults
            suffix-pronoun: ךָ you
        Predicate
          verb: צִמְּתוּ have been destroying <status="emendation" suffix="נִי">
          verb: צִמְּתוּתֻ <status="alternative" suffix="נִי">
          Object
            suffix-pronoun: נִי me 
  


Notes

Note for V. 17

  • v. 17 צִמְּתוּתֻנִי MT has an anomalous form, which Gesenius calls "barbarous"(cf. §55d). Seemingly a Pilel" form (with its second ת), the shuruq vowel at the first ת, is not compatible with the expected morphology of Pilel. The MT form seems to be a corruption of the 3rd person plural qatal ending. We therefore go with the emendation of BHS (supported by some medieval Hebrew manuscripts) and prefer to read the form as the basic Piel צִמְּתוּנִי.
No Lexical notes to display for Psalm 88:17.

Note for V. 17

  • v. 17: חֲרוֹנֶיךָ
For the paraphrase "outbursts of wrath", cf. comment for חֲמָתֶךָ in v. 8 above.
  • v. 17: עָלַי
In addition to the concrete spatial sense of the preposition על, definitely an element in the picture depicted in this verse, it often has a nuance of hostility, e.g., עָלָיו עָלָה שַׁלְמַנְאֶסֶר מֶלֶךְ אַשּׁוּר in 2 Kgs 17:3 (cf. Waltke & O’Conner §11.2.13.14).

Note for V. 17

  • The lack of movement and an habitual process prompts us to render עָבְרוּ in English as a present perfect progressive.
  • The lack of movement and an habitual process prompts us to render צִמְּתוּנִי in English as a present perfect progressive. ** for emendation verse-by-verse note v. 17b (MT: צִמְּתוּתֻֽנִי)



V. 18


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 18]
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: סַבּוּ they have been surrounding
            Object
              suffix-pronoun: נִי me
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase
                Preposition
                  preposition: כַ like
                Object
                  article: הַ the <status="elided">
                  noun: מַּיִם water
            Adverbial <gloss="all the time >> constantly" x="-90" y="-20">
              Nominal
                quantifier: כָּל all
                article: הַ the
                noun: יּוֹם day
      Fragment  
        Clause
          Predicate
            verb: הִקִּיפוּ they have been closing in
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase            
                Preposition
                  preposition: עָלַ on
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: י me
              Adverbial
                adverb: יָחַד together 
  


Notes

No Grammar notes to display for Psalm 88:18.

Note for V. 18

  • v. 18: יָחַד
The noun יָחַד ("unitednees) is, bar one instance, always used adverbially with the sense of "together, in union", cf. JM §126d

Note for V. 18

  • v. 18: כַּמַּיִם
The definite article here identifies "water" as the natural element. As such, the reference here is to a general characteristic of water, namely that of "swirling around". English has no definite article in such cases, hence the translation.
  • v. 18: כָּל־הַיּוֹם
When כל- is attached to a singular definite noun, the definiteness of this noun can be understood as either inclusive (denoting a class) or identifiable (denoting a specific referent), which in turn may influence the way we understand the entire כל construction as denoting, respectively, each member in the group (e.g. כל-העיר "each of all cities") or entirety of one entity (e.g. כל-העיר "the entire city"). In the case of the particular phrase כל-היום, we can therefore have two options, namely "each of all days" --> "all the time, constantly" (Gen 6:5) or "the entire day" --> "all day long" (Nu 11:32). JM §139, footnote 2, has a whole discussion of this particular phrase, where the environments which condition each of these readings are listed. According to their definitions, our כל-היום should be understood as "all the time". Although LXX, Jerome, Targum and the modern translations take it as "the whole day", we prefer to read it as JM suggests, also because it fits in better with the message of the psalmist who emphasizes his ongoing misery from youth, his praying to God every day, etc.

Note for V. 18

  • The lack of movement and a continuous process prompts us to render סַבּוּנִי in English as a present perfect progressive, with the notion of graduality.
  • The lack of movement and a continuous process (indicated by the context) prompts us to render הִקִּיפוּ in English as a present perfect progressive.



V. 19


Preferred

SimpleGrammar
DiscourseUnit [v. 19]
      Fragment
        Clause
          Predicate <gloss="you have caused to shun me">
            verb: הִרְחַקְתָּ you have made distant >> you have caused to shun
            Object <gloss="all my friends and companions">
              Nominal
                verb-participle: אֹהֵב friend
              Conjunction
                conjunction: וָ and
              noun: רֵעַ companion
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase            
                Preposition
                  preposition: מִמֶּ from
                Object
                  suffix-pronoun: נִּי me
      Fragment  
        Clause
          Predicate <gloss="you have caused to shun distres">
            verb: הִרְחַקְתָּ you have made distant >> you have caused to shun <status="elided">
            Object
              ConstructChain <gloss="my acquaintances">
                verb-participle: מְיֻדָּעַ acquaintances
                suffix-pronoun: י me
            Adverbial
              PrepositionalPhrase <status="revocalization">
                Preposition
                  preposition: מֵ from
                Object
                  noun: חֹשֶׁךְ darkness >> distress
            Adverbial <status="alternative">
              noun: מַחְשָׁךְ into darkness 
  


Notes

Note for V. 19

  • v. 19b מְיֻדָּעַי מֵחֹשֶׁךְ The preferred reading is based on a revocalisation of the text which matches both LXX and Jerome. This reading suggests a parallelism between 19a and 19b, with the verb implied in 19b, and מֵחֹשֶׁךְ parallel to מִמֶּנִּי, to get: You have caused my beloved and my friend to shun me, (and you have caused) my acquaintances (to shun) distress (which is my condition)." "Darkness" can figuratively be used for "distress" as can be seen in passages such as Ps 18:29. The reason for this reading to have been chosen as the preferred one is that, in addition to requiring no emendation, it results in an elegant parallelism and unproblematic grammar. An alternative reading takes מַחְשָׁךְ as an adverbial indicating directionality ("you pushed my acquaintances into darkness"), but that reading is not viable grammatically and contextually. For the full argumentation, see exegetical issue on v. 19b.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 19 alt1.jpg

  • v. 19b alt #1 The explicit MT version, represented by ESV, lit. "My acquaintances are darkness" involves no emendation, but is a hard reading. Some understand it as "My acquaintances have become darkness," i.e. "I cannot see my acquaintances anymore". The problem with this reading is that מַחְשָׁךְ means "a dark place" and not "darkness".

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 19 alt2.jpg

  • v. 19b alt #2 This alternative reading takes מַחְשָׁךְ as an adverbial locative ("my acquaintances are in darkness"), but that reading is not viable grammatically and contextually.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 19 alt3.jpg

  • v. 19b alt #3 Many modern translations read this line as "darkness is my closest friend." This requires changing the plural possessive suffix into a singular one through a simple revocalization. Dahood 1968, 307 reads this line in the same way, but with no revocalisation, explaining מידעי as pluralis majestatis, which seems less likely for an entity of unauthoritative nature such as a friend. Additionally, a different word order would have been expected in this case (see exegetical issue The Text and Meaning of Ps. 88:19b).

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 19 alt4.jpg

  • v. 19b alt #4 This reading is suggested by Rashi and some manuscripts, and assumes a שֹ instead of a שׁ so as to get a different noun derived from the root חשֹך "spare." The translation should be "My acquaintances are withheld (from me)." This reading is not represented by any modern translation and is less preferred because it abolishes the reading with the root חשׁך, which is a repeated root across the psalm with a poetic significance. It could, however, be an intentional pun playing on the equivocal reading of the ש letter; cf. analysis of Ps. 5, where a similar ambiguity arises in the very last word of the psalm.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 19 alt5.jpg

  • v. 19b alt #5 This reading involves an anacoluthon: it starts with a continuation of the parallelism initiated in the previous line, which is then immediately interrupted, switching into an exclamatory fragment מַחְשָׁךְ: "[you caused] my acquaintances [to stay away from me]... darkness!". This strong and plausible reading is suggested by some exegetes. For the full argumentation, see exegetical issue on v. 19b.

Psalm 088 - grammar v. 19 alt6.jpg

  • v. 19b alt #6 This reading follows Vulgate's "abstulisti" assuming, along the same lines of alternative #4, the root חשֹך, to get the translation "You have withheld my acquaintances (from me)". In addition to the reasons against alt #4, which apply here as well, this reading is not preferred as it involves an emendation of the text.

Note for V. 19

  • v. 19: רֵעַ
Psalm 088 - Rea - companion.jpg
No Phrase-level notes to display for Psalm 88:19.

Note for V. 19

  • The lack of movement and a continuous process (indicated by the context) prompts us to render הִרְחַקְתָּ in English as a present perfect progressive.