Introduction

The Close-but-Clear translation (CBC) exists to provide a window into the Hebrew text as we understand it. The CBC is used as the primary display text (along with the Hebrew) for most analytical visualisations. It is also used as the display text for most videos. For those users who do not know Hebrew, the CBC facilitates engagement with our materials. For those users who do know Hebrew, the CBC indicates how we are understanding the Hebrew text in terms of its syntax and semantics (lexical, phrasal, and verbal). The CBC is not intended to be a stand-alone translation but is rather a supplement to the Layer-by-Layer materials.

Steps

1. Gather glosses from phrase-level semantics.

View the phrase-level semantics diagram and use the word/phrase glosses (bold-blue text) to begin forming the CBC translation.

For example, the phrase-level diagram for Psalm 29:3 is as follows:

Putting the glosses together to form sentences (or sentence fragments, depending on the Hebrew grammar), results in the following:

YHWH's voice against the water.

The glorious God thundered.

YHWH against much water.

This forms the base of the CBC. After completing this initial step, some clauses may be considered complete. Other clauses will need to be further modified.

2. Modify as necessary.

Fill in gaps in the translation as necessary. For example, you may need to add elements that are elided in the grammatical diagram. Use parentheses for this. For example, Psalm 29:3c "YHWH against much water" should become "YHWH (thundered) against much water." Other modifications may be necessary where the resulting English text is incoherent or misleading.

3. Add punctuation.

Add proper punctuation. Follow the conventions included in "Conventions for Close-but-clear" below.

4. Post to the forum.

Post your CBC to the forum (the CBC category) for review. Give it the title "Close-but-Clear - Ps 000" and make sure the page is tagged with the appropriate psalm number. At the top of this page, include the Hebrew text (making sure you use the text from the open source Hebrew Bible). Important note: This forum CBC becomes the master version of the CBC for the psalm during the analysis process. All CBC materials on the Miro board should be consistent with the forum master version.

Appendix A: CBC Conventions

Spelling

As with all CDBR materials, follow UK English spelling conventions.

Capitalisation

Follow standard English conventions. This includes the following:

Do not capitalise pronouns referring to God. (Any ambiguity as to a referent should be dealt with in Participant Analysis.)
Do not capitalise terms such as “god,” “lord,” or “king” unless used as a name or direct title of God. For examples: In Ps 8, “YHWH, our lord” not “YHWH, our Lord;” In Ps 10:16, “YHWH is king forever,” not “YHWH is King forever.”

Vocatives

Follow standard English conventions. This includes the following:

Offset vocative with commas.
Do not add “O” to the vocative (e.g. "Lord" not "O Lord").
Do not add "you" to the vocative (e.g. Ps 2:10a "And now, kings, be wise" not "And now, you kings, be wise").

Punctuation

In general, follow standard English conventions.

Modals: As a default, volitive modals (imperatives, jussives, and cohortatives) should be punctuated with exclamation marks (as opposed to full stops). Use of full stops may be warranted upon consideration of other factors (e.g. clause length, emotional content).

Sentence fragments: Sentence fragments may be punctuated with exclamation marks. For example, Psalm 29:3a (a sentence fragment) is an exclamation. It might be punctuated with an exclamation mark: "YHWH's voice against the water!"

Synonymous poetic cola: Use semicolons between synonymous poetic cola.

Tetragrammaton

Write as YHWH (when reading in oral materials, read as "Lord").

Transliteration

Follow SBL simple version.

Supplied Information

Indicate supplied content (=information elided in the grammatical diagram) in square brackets (e.g., "YHWH [thundered] against much water" in Ps 29:3).

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