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= Variants and Textual Criticism =
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  |Description=What kinds of variants appear in texts for this psalm?
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  |Description=How does our analysis of the above features inform likely solutions to these questions?
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# Changes in perspective
= Summary =
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  |Description=What are your proposed line divisions for this text? (If we provide a pre-generated version from Fokkelman, Wendland, the computer, etc.: Which differences would you propose from the already provided version?) Provide explanations for divisions that might be debated.
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  |Description=What are your proposed section divisions for the text? Provide explanations for divisions that might be debated.
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  |Description=What is the communicative function of the poem as a whole? Of each of the sections you’ve identified?
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  |Description=What is the range of possible emotions that might be behind the poem? Please explain how these emotions change at different points or for different sections throughout the poem.
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  |Description=What features provide cohesion to the text (either as a whole, or within sections)?
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  |Description=What features give discontinuity, marking boundaries? (What changes happen between sections of the text)?
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  |Description=Where, if at all, do you notice multiple special features clustering in the poem?
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  |Description=Where, if at all, do you notice the absence of special features?
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  |Description=Based on your analysis, what would you consider the most prominent line(s) and/or section(s) in the text?
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  |Description=What would you consider the main message of the text, the primary thought an audience should take away from it?
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  |Description=What connections are made poetically, semantically, grammatically, or emotionally between specific lines or sections in the text? (Which lines/sections are marked by similar features?)
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  |Description=What large-scale structure(s) do you see in this text? (Chiastic of the whole poem or of sections of any size (ABCB'A')? Far parallelism (ABA'B')? Other?)
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  |Description=Taking all of the above information into consideration, what is your proposed (formal or dynamic) translation for this psalm into one of your primary languages?
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  |Description=What outline or visual representation would you suggest for this text? (You can write things out as text and/or upload a .jpg picture file if you’d like.)
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# Changes in addressee
= Bibliography =
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# Changes in subject/agent/patient
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= Verb-related Features =
 
== Analysis ==
Analyze the structure of the psalm using whatever methodology or theoretical framework(s) you find most helpful. Remember that our end goal is to study the emic features of the text, so together we may end up building a new theory of understanding Hebrew poetry. We’re walking that fine line between staying grounded while also thinking creatively.
* See [[Feature List| Appendix A]] for a list of possible features to consider in your analysis. Please let us know if you find additional features that should be added.
* Write up your findings according to the categories below.
* See Appendix B (tbd) for an example writeup based on Psalm 13.
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== Sections ==
What boundaries/segments do you see in the psalm? Please provide your rationale/evidence.
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== Emphasis ==
What line(s) and/or section(s) seem to be most highlighted in this psalm (i.e., what should be featured most prominently in a new translation)? Provide your rationale/evidence.
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== Connections ==
What connections do you note between certain words, phrases, lines, or sections? Provide your rationale/evidence.
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== Translation ==
Provide your own translation with formatting that reflects the segmentation, emphasis, and connections you see in the psalm.
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== Template ==
Summarize your findings in the kind of template found in [[Template_Example | Appendix C]] (based on Psalm 13). Please feel free to adapt this template however you think would communicate the structure most intuitively. It can be much simpler if you’d like. We are still very much in the initial creation stages here!
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== Other Insights ==
Please include here any additional information you might have gathered, such as word studies, figures of speech, cultural insights from biblical backgrounds materials or anything else.
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== Reflections ==
What analysis methodology or theoretical framework(s) did you use? What questions/residue do you still have about this psalm? Work flow: About how many hours did you spend on this psalm? Are there any Hebrew features on which you’d like to focus/specialize across several psalms (example: distribution of vav, independent personal pronouns, etc.)? Any other suggestions, comments, or questions about the project?
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== Bibliography ==
Include here any bibliography you find particularly helpful for this Psalm. If you drag and drop from Zotero, formatted for Wikipedia Citation, then it will be fully searchable.
Include here any bibliography you find particularly helpful for this Psalm. If you drag and drop from Zotero, formatted for Wikipedia Citation, then it will be fully searchable.
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